David,Thank you for the submission of the first of your collection of stories, Dave’s True Stories. This is a great first draft.
It’s clear you applied yourself, and there are a lot of things working well. You are a couple drafts away from being able to publish, if that’s what you want to do.First, I am afraid I must insist that you title this particular story if you wish to include it in a collection.
Second, since this is supposed to be a final draft, it must adhere to the MLA formatting requirements—head it properly and write it in double spaced 12-point, Times New Roman font.
At least pick a font with seraphs, David—anything that’s not blocks and blocks of text in all-caps.This story is about two things, David: music recording and the.
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